Please tell me what you think before I send it to them.
(Music)

[Random kinda shaking shots of a boy waiting for the bus.]
People change and plans get changed and
Everything changes but You
[See boy arrive to school.]
Everybody moves around and
[Boy gets to locker and puts away some books]
Everything gets pushed around but You
[Boy walks to class. Gets to class and is made fun of by jocks]
You always stay the same, stay the same

[cut to band playing]
[random shots]

I want to finish last
Last in the world's eyes
No matter what I do
I will be first in your eyes

[boy goes to PE]
I am running in this race and
[see boy running track in PE cloths.]
I am pressing onwards towards the finish line
[boy makes it to the finish last]
You have promised me a better life
[close up of boy holding his hand on his head. Cut to jocks making fun of him.]
Far beyond this world, far beyond this place and time

[cut to boy walking home. Jocks pull up with girlfriend in their car and teas the boy]
I want to finish last
[boy gets home.]
Last in the world's eyes
[shows parents fighting.]
No matter what I do
boy goes to his room, looking like he is going to cry.]
I will be first in your eyes
[boy lays on his bad. Face down in his pillow.]

[cut to band playing again]

I want to finish last
Last in the world's eyes
No matter what I do
I will be first in your eyes

Music

[new day. Boy goes back to school to see his locker vandalized.]
People change and plans get changed and
Everything changes but You
[boy gets back to class. He sits down, then his chair brakes. Everyone laughs.]
Everybody moves around and
Everything gets pushed around but You
[cut to close up of girl holding a pic of paper out. switch to boy looking confused.]
You always stay the same, stay the same
[show paper that says something along the lines of “Come to church with me!” boy takes the paper and walks away.]

I want to finish last
Last in the world's eyes
[cut to girl standing there and camera moving away from her.]
No matter what I do
I will be first in your eyes

[cut to boy coming out of a car. Switch to shot of a church.]
I want to finish last
Last in the world's eyes
[boy comes to youth room to see kids there. Girl comes up and greets and welcomes him.]
No matter what I do
I will be first in your eyes


I want to finish last
Last in the world's eyes
[cut to boy having fun with the youth group.]
No matter what I do
I will be first in your eyes

[Switch to the youth leader. He asks if anyone wants to except Christ (not like out loud-ish. Like his lips move, but you can’t hear it.)
I want to finish last
[boy comes up and leader prays over him]
Last in the world's eyes
[boy gets home to see his mom smiling. He gets up and hugs him.]
No matter what I do
[fade into the band playing]
I will be first in your eyes



music
[End with a quick shot of the band with the boy, his mom and the girl chilling somewhere.]
Copy write: Rachel

This message has been edited. Last edited by: IxHaveFakeADD,

sounds good lotsa spelling problems though

except for the Stellar Kert thing..yeah....and yeah edit it so it makes it more fomal like cuz then it looks better

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sounds good lotsa spelling problems though

really? stupid word.

and what do you mean more formal?

RTGGLRNHG


ya this is only Rachel's dream.

Come on please.

hmmmmmmmmmmm..........

that means nothing to me.