ok guys... i need and expert opinion... thats where you come in... ok see i really don't have anybody i can show my song to to say "that stinks" or "maybe you can say this not that" or whatever so you know its hard for me to get better with out a bit of critisism! so i guess this is really when you come in.... ok i want to show someone like songs that I write... congratz you have been chosen as the lucky winner of who i'm asking if they would mind reading over my songs and say if thye aer anygood at all!! yay for you!! ok well if you want to see one of my song just send me and email (4given4ever@sbcglobal.net) cuz you know i don't really want to post them on her cuz.... ya know i just don't..... well anywayz.... plesae and thank you!!
...i can show you more if you like.... you know that whole paragraph is just a big explination of... I want to show my songs to somebody and you can be that sombody if you email me and say you want to see a song I wrote of whatever.... cuz i dont' really want o like you know post them on the world wide web!!! ok so yeah i sent you on..... your name is grammatically incorect.... its should be shorty.... ok yeah just thought you mite want to knwo that lol ttyl
ok so yeah the ppl that i showed songs to.... that would be well Cece and Meg well could you guys like email me back and like give me some feedback cuz yall have kinda left me hangin.... please and thank you! (if you use your please and thank yous then you always get what you want j/k )
hey i will send some. i havn't forgot! i kinda have been kinda busy so i havn't gotten some of my newest songs on this copmuter yet so... when i get them on here i will sent them to you!
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